I read through “A Team-Building Exercise” once when it went online, then I couldn’t stand to go back. Too many typos, too many grammatical errors. I proofread that bastard at least four times, too. I used to have Shawna do a proof on all of my stuff, but after a year I decided to let her rest before she succumbed to some brain-eating nano-disease.
Looks like she’s gonna have to go back on the clock.
NOTE: Hours later, I had to go back and fix a typo in the above paragraph.